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    Inactive Member Zeik Blaine's Avatar
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    Closing the black curtain
    In front of me
    Despising what?s beyond it
    The fear
    That lies with it
    The shame
    That I hide from
    Stand behind the curtain
    Can you see it?
    Why is it there?
    It has came for me
    Thinking I can run
    Thoughtless emotions
    Crazed mind
    Fixated on the fact
    Death is near

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    This too was a good poem...just one question...when you say, "death is near" is that literal death or is death symbolic for something else?

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    I believe that it was death lurking behind everyone's curtain, one way or another. Death as in dying.

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    seriously, fuck death...

    man, i used to write about death all the time..and all the other ideas that came with it......violence, beating ass and suicide....it took a real long time for me to grow out of that....I don't know..it just seems that it's the wrong thing to write about...for me anyways...but hey, it was release...as it prolly is for you....I just found it to be the wrong release...because the more the I wrote about it...the more I wanted it.....

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